capricorneo

Saturday, November 11, 2006

ME


Hello

Now I’m going to talk about me.

I like going out with my friends, first have a dinner and talk about us and our life, afterwards we go to the bar, pub o disco, finally we finish in some house to drink a coffee, and then everybody comes back at home.

I always go out with my old colleges of high school, we studied in the same centre, we’re ten people seven of us we studied together, in our group there are two couples since the high school, and the rest they meet the other person o couple with the rest of the group.

At this moment all of us are married, there are two children a boy and a girl and two couple are expecting a baby now, only one couple don’t have baby.

I’m studying English because I feel like speaking different languages but now I have an opportunity. When I’ll finish English I’m going to study German because it’s difficult and like this challenge.

I like going to gym, I like running, swimming and toning up, but I only go to it twice a week.

In this moment in my life I want to study anything else, but I don’t know that, because there are different and interesting degrees for me: architecture, law and journalism, they are very different but I think that everybody has a various worries.

I’m hoping for a change in my life but this don’t has arrived and I think that I have to do something, I don’ like my job, and I need to do different things to feel well with myself ..

5 Comments:

Blogger NaCuPeNdA said...

thanks for your comment!i've made some phone calls and now everybody is happy, many thanks!
did you go to mexico?
you're so lucky for continue wiht the friends of your high school it's fantastic.

4:29 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi there!
Please, have a look at the "common mistakes" list in my blog. You will be able to correct some of the mistakes in this text.
Thanks!

4:47 AM  
Blogger NaCuPeNdA said...

i've been there two summers ago with my family and some friends and it's very nice, i really enjoyed it.
thanks for your help!
kisses

12:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hi capricorneo,

very nice that you keep meeting with your high school friends, I think that is really enjoy your life.

1:07 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You do communicate well and your English is nice but there some mistakes you could have avoided.

You say:
everybody come
my antics colleges (mistake #4)However, the adjective antic, her is wrong. You should use a different one!)
-two couple
-I’m study English
-different idioms
-but only I go to it twice a week (mistake # 1)
- because there are different degrees for me interesting
-I hope a one change in my life but
-need to do different things for I feel myself well. (also mistake#1)

You should say:
-everybody (singular pronoun) comeS
- "antics" (mistake #4) However, the adjective "antic", is not an English word. You have invented it! Use a proper one.
-two coupleS
- either I’m studying English or I study English
-different languages
-but I only go to it twice (position!!!!)
because there are different and interesting degrees for me
-I'm hoping for a change in my life but
- I need to do different things to feel well with myself.

Hope this helps!

1:55 AM  

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